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08/05/2005

Poems again

And so i've been writing poetry again. I know, I know; a vice I have not yet trained myself to overcome.

Here's the latest, 5 poems to be exact. The first was written quite a while ago, the rest were written between 1:00am (very late saturday/very early sunday) and this moment in time (15:18 BST)


Beautiful World

Oh,
we live in such a beautiful world,
with many wars and all of the strife,
which epitomizes this life.

Oh,
we live in such a happy world,
with crime and abuse rising,
to levels unseen.

Oh,
we live in such a glorious world,
with wise lies deceiving,
and false hands receiving.

Oh,
we live in such a charming world,
where technology has exceeded,
our humanity.

Such a glorious place,
has anyone seen,
the place which shines,
with wars and want,
hunger and hurt,
fighting and fear.

Oh, we live in such a beautiful world.
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Sight of the Night

on a canvas dark the painter begins,
to paint the most glorious of things.

A speckle of light,
but not too bright,
emits a shudder of pure delight.

the painter began on a darkened sea,
but has created light to shine forth free.

The painter adds
ingredients three,
to add to the sight which we see.

a pinch of distance - it's a measured art,
one which pulls the strings of one's heart.

the tone of the paint,
a glimmering thing,
creates but all of the shimmering.

And now a pearl is placed on the sea,
to be hanging there so very free.

a pearl,
as white as could be,
it is a real glory to see.

And next, the most important thing of all,
without which this beauty means nought at all.

the finest of magic,
a glorious thing,
is added as a thousand birds sing.

(for to make this magic very strong,
it is the painter who adds the finest song.)

But what's the ingredient,
the magical three,
shall it remain but a mystery?

There is no need for the mystery,
but what can the final ingredient be?

The painter smiles and his face fills with glee,
for the final ingredient is added, you see:
A moment of romance, between you and me.

----

Night Sky

I look towards the starry sky,
letting out a quiet sigh,
'Tis the moon that i spy.

no rope holds it to it's place,
there it hangs about it's space,
hanging quietly with it's grace.

The sea of stars!
The shining light!
To look on Mars,
to see the sight,
of a thousand candles burning bright.

The canvas pitch black be,
of that everlasting sea,
spots shimmering so free.

this is the view,
that's what I see,
as i look towards the starry sea.
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Hope

Look at the wars around in this life,
look at the hunger and all of the strife,
poverty and misery, it is this which is rife.

Some blame humanity who can be evil as sin,
others blame Fate against who none can win,
but I blame he who controls it all.

Oh, God on high who knows everything,
with millions of angels who dont move a wing,
whom, we are told, your praises sing.

what do they sing when they see our earth,
how can they sing their praises of mirth,
for evil has this place been since it's birth.

God in his glory sits on his throne,
looking about to see what he does own,
the millennial countings are about to take place.

The angels on high look to creation,
and see what is under his domination,
hardly the products of our salvation:

a little part of abominations,
a thousands measures of disgrace,
and a million more of losing face.

and yet one little angel sitting on high,
who knows what will happen nigh,
heaves a glorious sigh.

For this little angel knows what will be,
it opens it's eyes and turns to see,
our planet which was created by He.

Looking past the misery,
looking past the pain,
looking to see what humanity may gain.

amidst the hunger and amidst the strife,
amidst the misery of this life,
it looks to see a special thing.

in the layers of dirt and thrown to the side,
amidst the hurt and trying to hide,
a tiny pearl of hope he gathers with pride.

hope for better things to come,
the hope of peace, the hope of life,
the hope of an end to all the strife.

Bring it to the creator who will smile,
who smiles a smile full of glee who says,
"Yes, bring it near, it's this, my beloved, which is dear."
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Repentance

An angel was punished one day, you see,
and came to the earth sad as could be.

He couldn't return to his place in the sky,
and so would let out a saddened sigh.

He travelled the earth to look and to see,
He wandered around for a place to be.

He could only return to his place in the sky,
If he found something worth more than his sigh.

The earth he would travel until he could see,
something of worth so in the sky he could be.

gold is of no use to those who dwell in the sky,
"but what's of more value than that?" he would sigh.

then one day he thought he could see,
something of value - but what could it be?

whilst flying about just under the sky,
he heard a girl heave a heavy sigh.

this was of value any can see,
a sigh of repentance: worth more than much could ever be.

And so he returned to his place in the sky,
holding aloft a little girl's sigh.

and now you know and now you can see,
how valuable repentance can actually be.
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And that's it for now, dears!
My personal favourites are Night Sky and Sight of the Night (yes, very original names, but hey!)

The one entitled "Hope" does not necessarily construe my own opinions and/or feelings, though at times, I do feel that God has "millions of angels who dont move a wing" and the "a thousands measures of disgrace, and a million more of losing face" parts. Ah, well.

Then we have repentance. A cute little poem written for the deeply religious, the overly romantic, or the slightly naive. And where do you fit in? ;-)
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I sent the poem "Night Sky" to a fellow poet who lives here and she came up with this rendering of it, which, as I see it, certainly shows me up!

I look toward a starry sky,
escaping my lips, a silent sigh.
Filled with awe and wonder, I take it in;
not the least bit sure where to begin.

'Tis the moon that catches my watchful eye,
no explanation can I provide.
No rope or belt fastens it there,
it just sits silently with care.

A sea of stars in the graceful night;
a thousand candles buring bright.
Although the canvas, black may be,
there shines pure light for all to see.

This is my view and what I see,
as I gaze at all that lies before me.
Its sheer beauty exists, untainted;
with envy, I watch the scene almost hated.

All of a sudden, we are one,
as I marvel at the wonders that God has done.
What a loving God he must be,
to release this moment unto me!

This time in nature I must savour,
as I find myself in His favour.
Again, what an amazing sight,
this cold and lonely, starry night.
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Compare that to my one, and frankly dear children, mine looks utter pants!

Bye, and enjoy!

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Comments

And those were in no way depressing or pessimistic....

And as for your comment mister

I am noteing the complete lack of reference to my flirting dig as an avoidance.

For this reason I shall laugh at you...

Ha ha

Posted by: bec | 09/05/2005

only two of them were "depressing" or "pessimistic" - and out of quite a few poems i've written, 2 is not bad is it? Hell, 2 out of 5 isn't bad either. God, gimme some credit, woman!

I tend not to mention things i agree with in other people's comments in my own. What's the use of talking about something we both agree with? It makes for boring conversation, preaching to the choir. Therefore, your flirt comment wasn't an avoidance, it was simply agreement: the day I flirt with you (you're very lovely i'm sure *sarcasm*) is the day that igloos are made in The Great Sandy Desert.

If I were to laugh at you too much, the RSPCA (Royal Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Aussies) would be on my back, so I won't laugh. Instead, I shall pity you, because I know that's more insulting. *pities you*

Posted by: dj | 09/05/2005

*doesnt care*

Posted by: bec | 09/05/2005

Unless you can find a boy who is ready to be seriously injured I doubt I will have a new boyfreind now or ever.

I am quiet happily resigned to the single life... is much more fun that way

By the way.... it doesnt take a 5 year old child with a learning disability to figure out that I have been more bitter since Geoff and I have broken up... It's like obvious

Posted by: bec | 09/05/2005

No one actually ever said i was less bitter... maybe it just showed less coz I had to spend my efforts else where.

Posted by: bec | 09/05/2005

do you realise we could just say all this in msn? especially as we have the window open already, so dont even need to make the effort to open it.

Also, it doesnt matter if you're not actually less bitter or if it just showed less, the point is, *we didnt see it as much*

Posted by: dj | 09/05/2005

We probably could... but then how would other people see our comments and laugh at our stupidity... and by our, I meant yours.

Anyho I am off to bed to sleep tight and let the bed bugs bite.... they are big ones over here.

Then again, I couldnt expect you to know that

Posted by: bec | 09/05/2005

yes, i suppose.

and laugh at my stupidity? If there IS stupidity, that's just an act i put on whilst talking to aussies. make you feel at home and all.

as we say over here...if the bed bugs bite...bite back!

Posted by: dj | 09/05/2005

....You're always comparing yourself to other people....stop it!

Posted by: Bex - Lab Huntress | 09/05/2005

ahh, the wise bexy has spoken.
Alas, m'dear, but the schitzo in me has prevailed:

There are those who say it's comparison which gives perspective, and I agree with them.

There are those who say comparison with others demeans one's worth, and I agree with them too.

And to the one who says "you can't agree to both!" - well, I agree with you as well!

Posted by: dj | 09/05/2005

I get that... *nods*

Just don't compare our poetry,
I come up short each time, you see? ;)

xxx

Posted by: Bexy - Lab Huntress | 09/05/2005

meh, moot, squiggum and Sainsburys.

What does all of that have in common with your last comment?

It's a load of rubbish, of course!

Posted by: dj | 09/05/2005

That was a calculated and premeditated attack, mister!

You'll come to a sticky (and possibly grocery based!) end someday!

Posted by: potnoodleboy | 09/05/2005

on sainsbury's? yes, yes it was.
meheheheheh.

Posted by: dj | 09/05/2005

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